{"id":580,"date":"2007-10-23T06:45:19","date_gmt":"2007-10-23T11:45:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/?p=580"},"modified":"2007-10-24T06:10:53","modified_gmt":"2007-10-24T11:10:53","slug":"songwriting-ii","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/2007\/10\/23\/songwriting-ii\/","title":{"rendered":"Songwriting II……"},"content":{"rendered":"

Sorry for the delay….. Reference back to the original “Songwriting”<\/strong> Post for how this came about (I will put a link here as soon as I remember how!)….. I like Jek’s idea of “tightening-up”<\/em> the lyrics….. I had thought of it, and was planning to do it in the editing phase…. The first two verses will have to be “tightened-up”<\/em> to match the chorus’s and the 3rd verse….. Here’s what we got so far…..<\/p>\n

Verse 1:<\/strong>
\nSun\u2019s up – No sleep for many a night, (MR)
\nSun\u2019s down – Time for a night on the town, (Robo)
\nLate nights can keep a good man down, (Sunn – edit MR)
\nEasy money and Bagdad Knights, (Anon and Robo)
\nFirst Class on the next LA flight… (MR)<\/p>\n

Verse 2:<\/strong>
\nAlarm\u2019s ringing and so\u2019s my head, (MR)
\nCan I make it to Seattle, or be better off dead?, (Sunn)
\nThey dumped me on this plane, (Anon)
\nNow I\u2019m on the only train, (Robo)
\nAnd the alarm keeps ringing in my head… (Anon)<\/p>\n

Chorus 1<\/strong> (Edit by Jek):
\nLife\u2019s been ordinary, (MR)
\nEverything in place, (MR)
\nAlarm ringing my head, (MR)
\nCan\u2019t keep (the) pace. (MR)<\/p>\n

Verse 3:<\/strong>
\nLocked in a bean ward, (Anon)
\nTied to this bed, (Anon)
\nWhat can you say, (Sunn)
\nwhen all\u2019s been said, (Sunn)
\nStill ringing my head…. (MR)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

START HERE – NEED VERSE 4….<\/strong><\/p>\n

-Then Chorus 2<\/strong> (Edit by Jek)
\nLife\u2019s been ordinary, (MR)
\nCan\u2019t stand the pace, (Anon)
\nAlarm ringing my head, (MR)
\nOut of place…. (Anon)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

Then maybe a repeat of Chorus 1<\/strong> and\/or more verses…. We’ll see where it goes…. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Sorry for the delay….. Reference back to the original “Songwriting” Post for how this came about (I will put a link here as soon as I remember how!)….. I like Jek’s idea of “tightening-up” the lyrics….. I had thought of it, and was planning to do it in the editing phase…. The first two verses […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[2],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/580"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=580"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/580\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=580"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=580"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.mrambler.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=580"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}